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What to Say When Negotiating a Salary Offer

Getting a job offer is exciting, but the number on paper isn't always final. A short, confident message can open the door to a better deal without any awkwardness.

Use these when

  • You received an offer below expectations
  • You want to negotiate before accepting
  • Comparing offers between companies
  • Countering after research on market rate

Skip these if

  • Don't accept immediately out of excitement
  • Don't apologize for asking for more
  • Don't give an ultimatum unless you mean it

15 replies to choose from

Professional

Thank you for the offer — I'm excited about the role. Based on my experience and market research, I was hoping we could discuss a base closer to [amount].

Classic, confident counter.

Confident

I'm really excited about this opportunity. Given my background, I'd like to see if we can get to [amount].

Direct and self-assured.

Polite

I appreciate the offer and I'm looking forward to joining — would there be any flexibility on the base salary?

Softer opener for a counter.

Friendly

So excited about this! Before I sign, is there room to talk through the compensation a bit more?

Warm tone while still negotiating.

Casual

Loving the offer overall, just want to see if we can nudge the salary up a bit before I say yes.

Relaxed but clear.

Short & Direct

Is there flexibility on the base salary before I accept?

Quick, gets straight to the ask.

Professional

I'd love to accept, but I was hoping for something closer to [amount] given the scope of the role.

Ties the ask directly to responsibilities.

Confident

Given the offers I'm weighing, I need this to be closer to [amount] to move forward.

Strong when you have competing offers.

Apologetic

I hate to negotiate, but I wanted to see if there's any room to move on the number.

Softer approach for those uneasy negotiating.

Polite

Thank you again for the offer — could we set up a quick call to talk through the compensation package?

Moves negotiation to a call, often more effective.

Funny

I promise I'm easy to work with, just a little less easy on salary — any room to move on the number?

Light way to break tension.

Professional

If the base can move to [amount], I'm ready to accept right away.

Clear condition for acceptance.

Confident

I'm confident I'll bring strong value here, and I'd like the offer to reflect that at [amount].

Value-based negotiation.

Short & Direct

Before accepting, can we revisit the number?

Minimal but effective.

Polite

Really appreciate the offer — is there flexibility on salary, bonus, or start date I should know about?

Opens negotiation on multiple fronts.

Make it fit your exact message

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Common questions

How do I counter a salary offer without sounding greedy?
Frame it around market research and the value you bring, not just wanting more money.
Should I give a specific number when countering?
Yes — a clear number or range is easier to respond to than a vague ask.
What if they say the offer is final?
Ask if there's flexibility elsewhere, like signing bonus, PTO, or remote days.

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